Thursday, 14 April 2016

Trick or Treat Story update...

Honestly, Im shocked. Five comments! That is the most responces i've had since i started this blog. Thanks eveyone.

I'm afraid the Futa Videl/Pan/Bulma story is still my first priority as it is a commission. Sorry.

Well as there has been so much intrest in the Trick or Treat story, here is what i've discussed the requester.

Ok, then the way i envision the story is Gohan and videl comeing home after dinner out, getting in the mod with a glass of wine, only to have the three older woman comeing round. They chat for while but when 18 comes back from a bathroom break, she reveals that she's had a look around and found the sex game, that videl confesses to having bought the for valantines day just gone but they never got round to playing it. 18 and Bulma both insist they play, Gohan tries to talk them out of it but his slightly drunk mother tells him to lighten up and go with it.
They set the board game up and, the rules are that they sit in a circle and go round, taking a card that they must either do or direct to another player or players. If they refuse there is a forfit that they must do. As it's Videl's birthday, she goes first. She pulls a card that she directs to bulma, that is what is the best sex she has ever had. For Chichi's turn she directs at gohan, he has to strip for the group. Next, bulma  tells 18 to undress chichi but without using her hands, she refuses so she has to do the forfit, which is masterbarte, that she does but doing so reveals her futa side. The group stare wide eye'd so she reveals it was done by dr gero. 18 then gets revenge by Videl striping Gohan in a lap dance, which she counters after  by having Chichi and Bulma make out and strip eachother. Then it's Chichi's turn and she does it herself, give Gohan a blow job. Bulma pulls the next card and tells videl she has to have 10 orgasims, Videl tries to refuse and the forfit is that if she doesn't complete the 10 in a timelimit she'll be the sex slave of the other players.
They all agree to move it to the bedroom so she'll be more comfortable,uses her vibrator to masterbate but the sight gets the others so horny the others start playing with gohan. Videl begs for attention but instead chichi begins to eat her. When Gohan  joins in, mother and son share Videl  while Bulma and 18 playwith eachother before joining in.  Finaly Chichi and Bulma break off, leaving Gohan and 18 to DP videl. She cums for the 10 time just after the alarm sounds so she loses the contest.
 To be honest,I haven't given the ending much thought. After her 10 orgasim, Videl will be on the brink of passing out when she hears 18 say 'Awww such a pitty. Looks like you lose, slave.' I suppose then it would fade out to the next morning when Videl wakes up to find herself naked but alone in bed with a collar around her neck and she goes into the main living area to find Gohan fucking his mother and Bulma,when 18 comes up behind her and  whispers 'Good moning my pet.' 
As i said before, i'm open to any suggestions for the dares. Also, given there has been so much interest in this story (ok five comments might be much by any stretch of the imagination but it's the most this blog has ever had so lets not quible) I am giving somethought to commissioning a pic to go with it....


  1. Having trouble with the ending? After reading your idea, I say that's a good idea. Videl wakes up naked with a chain around her neck, as a symbol to her losing the challenge and she's everyone's sex slave. How long is she going to be their sex slave? I'd say that after Eighteen says to Videl "Good mourning my pet" Gohan Bulma and ChiChi immediately stop what they're doing and turns to Videl. They slowly approach her, ready for Videl to begin her services to them.

    The story can end with Videl feeling scared and excited about the idea of being everyone's sex slave. She nervous because she has to do this for so long, there's no backing out, and she has no idea what either her husband, eighteen, bulma, chichi will do to her or what crazy sexual fun they'll have with her. Videls also wondering if her pussy can't take much more of this or if she'll be sore for a week. At the same time she's excited because the suspense and thrill of the unknown exhilarates her. She absolutely loves to cum and the thought of everyone making her cum over and over just like last night will be wonderful and magical. Story ends with Videl saying to her master and mistresses "How may I serve you?"

    Okay, so I added a bit to your ending. Do you like it? I think its a good place to end because... who knows? If you're thinking about writing a continuation of this story, you could write about what Gohan and the other girls will do with videl who is their sex slave. Just giving you my thoughts. So can't wait for you to get started on this even though you have another story high on the priority.

    Oh PS... Please commission this ^^

  2. Sounds like fun. Poor Videl's going to go crazy in this story. Mind if I add my own truths and dares to the suggestion box?
    - Gohan gets a blowjob from all of the girls.
    - Chichi gets tickle tortured w/o cumming for 5 min.
    - How about each girl puts a vibrator on them and turns it on high and whoever cums last must lick the cum off of the other girls?
    - Videl puts strawberries, whipped cream, chocolate syrup on Gohan and the others and she must lick them all clean.
    - Chichi asks Bulma if she had sex with anyone else besides Vegeta.
    - 18 asks Videl whats her wildest sexual fantasy?
    - ChiChi asks Bulma if she and Goku ever had sex in public.

    Need help with titles? Hows about Birthday Sex since you mentioned in the summary that its Videl's birthday? Anxious to see if my ideas or if any of the other ideas before will be used. This story is sounding so hot, this'll probably be your best DBZ lemon. I guarantee.

  3. Oh ho, you gonna make Videl cum 10 times? What's your plan on that? Is Videl only going to use vibrators and/or dildos? Will Gohan and the other girls each get a turn in making Videl cum? Chichi and Bulma can ake turns eating Videl's pussy. Also Gohan has his cock and Eighteen apparently has hers as well; so perhaps have them fuck Videl in various positions like missionary, doggy, cowgirl (or reverse), standing, bridge, leg-over-shoulder, wheelbarrow, etc. Ooh, and you also mention theres going to be a dp with Gohan and Eighteen on Videl. I would say save that position for the last orgasm because I heard that that's the bees knees for women. I'm sure Videl would love getting both her holes filled. Perhaps intensify the orgasm with Bulma and Chichi play with Videl's tits or suck/nibble on her nipples. God why am I getting so turned on thinking about all of this? Hope you start working on this story soon.

  4. I have a suggestion regarding the double penetration at the end. There are 2 variations for the DP. The first is the Cowgirl DP, where the Videl's back turned to Android 18 on top fucking her ass and front turned to Gohan on bottom fucking her pussy. There's also the Reverse Cowgirl DP, where Videl's back turned to Android 18 on bottom fucking her ass and front turned to Gohan on top fucking her pussy. Do you think you can incorporate both DP variations in this story of yours? I'm sure the requester and Videl would just love it.